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Standard Format: (Expository Writing) In order for kids with divorced parents to grow up happily, what are the arrangements that their parents should make? Tell us about them.

Children Need Love and Money

It is said that one third of couples get divorced in Japan. It is gradually becoming common for single mothers to raise their children by themselves. However, parents’ responsibility remains until their kids have grown up. Generally, people say that love and money are essential when raising children. Even if it is hard for the parents to do so, they should give at least one for their children to live happily.

Now money is more needed than old days. Parents should provide money as much as possible to give their children quality education. Children who have good education have better job opportunities compared to those who do not. Parents want their kids to live a normal life, it becomes difficult in this competitive world. As there are a lot of people having degrees, poorly educated people having no skill will spend a hard life for good. Children should have some skills in this advanced world, so education is essential and more money is needed.

Of course, love is the most important factor for children to grow up happily. There are many people with low self esteem even if they have both parents. Many specialists say it is because of the lack of love from their parents. Children want to believe that they are worth being given love. To make sure that children believe their parents’ love and have self esteem, the parents should show respect to their ex-partner instead of complaining about him or her. Aside from that, making some opportunities to meet their father or mother helps their children feel happy because they can feel love from both of their parents. 

We feel happy when we are satisfied. When parents get divorced, it negatively impacts on their children. However, there are many things that parents could do to make their children happy. If it is hard for parents to give money and love to their children, parents should give at least one of them to their children for them to live happily.


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